10/21/2009 6:35 PM Sun lo......... (71 Comments)
- Tweety
- 21, Pakistan
Sun lo.........
Pass aao,ik ilteja "sun lo",
pyaar hai tumse be-panah "sun lo",
Ek tumhi ko khuda se manga hai,
jab bhi maingi hy koi Dua "sun lo",
Ibteda ishq ki howi tum sa.....
tum ho chahat ki inteha "sun lo"
Bin tery jee nahi sakun ga mei..
lot aao,meri sada "sun lo".
Daikh lo zindagi adhuri hai...
Na rahoo aur ab juda "sun lo".
tum sirf tum ho zindagi meri'
sach hai sach hai bakhuda "sun lo"...
Raaz koi nahi mera apna...
tum raho gee mere sada "sun lo"
@..@me.tweety@..@
pyaar hai tumse be-panah "sun lo",
Ek tumhi ko khuda se manga hai,
jab bhi maingi hy koi Dua "sun lo",
Ibteda ishq ki howi tum sa.....
tum ho chahat ki inteha "sun lo"
Bin tery jee nahi sakun ga mei..
lot aao,meri sada "sun lo".
Daikh lo zindagi adhuri hai...
Na rahoo aur ab juda "sun lo".
tum sirf tum ho zindagi meri'
sach hai sach hai bakhuda "sun lo"...
Raaz koi nahi mera apna...
tum raho gee mere sada "sun lo"
@..@me.tweety@..@
10/23/2009 3:21 PMRe: Re: Re: Re: Re: Sun lo.........
Thanks
10/23/2009 3:23 PMRe: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Sun lo.........
its oki...........
10/28/2009 10:03 AMRe: Re: Re: Re: Re: Sun lo.........
mariya
23, mirpur, Pakistan
kyun k mein khud b poetry krti hun :)
11/3/2009 2:49 AMRe: Sun lo.........
Irfanjee007
31, Karachi, Pakistan
Nice Poem Tweety Frutiy .....! :-P
Agar ham ko bhi kuch kehney ki ijazat ho to kahoon....
===== WAFA KEY PHOOL =====
Main peyaar,wafa or khaloos key phool,
Apney hathon sey chun chun kar bantteta rahaa,
Or mairey haath,
Khood gharzi or be vfayi key kanton sey,
Lahoolhaan ho gaye,
Aisey me dill ney kehaa,
Too keuon en khood gharz logon key liye,
Apney aap ko zakhmi karta hai,
Or main muskra diya keh main mayoos nahi,
Koi to hoga,
Jo apney hathon ko zakhmi kar key,
Mujhey bhi peyaar or wafa key phool bakhshey ga.
Agar ham ko bhi kuch kehney ki ijazat ho to kahoon....
===== WAFA KEY PHOOL =====
Main peyaar,wafa or khaloos key phool,
Apney hathon sey chun chun kar bantteta rahaa,
Or mairey haath,
Khood gharzi or be vfayi key kanton sey,
Lahoolhaan ho gaye,
Aisey me dill ney kehaa,
Too keuon en khood gharz logon key liye,
Apney aap ko zakhmi karta hai,
Or main muskra diya keh main mayoos nahi,
Koi to hoga,
Jo apney hathon ko zakhmi kar key,
Mujhey bhi peyaar or wafa key phool bakhshey ga.
11/4/2009 12:05 AMRe: Re: Re: Sun lo.........
Irfanjee007
31, Karachi, Pakistan
Thanks Fruity....! :-P
Aap ko pasand ayi mairey liye yehi bohot hai. :-)
Aap ko pasand ayi mairey liye yehi bohot hai. :-)
10/21/2009 8:04 PMRe: Sun lo.........
Dil udhaas hai bahut koi paigaam hii likh dO
Tum apna naam na likho, gumnaam hi likh dO
Meri qismat mein gham-e-tanhayi hai lekin
Tamaam umar na likho magar ek shaam hi likh dO
Zuroori nahi ki mil jaaye sukoon har kisi kO
Sare-e-bazm na aao magar benaam hi likh do
Ye jaanta hoon ki umar bhar tanha mujhkO rehna hai
Magar pal dO pal, ghadi do ghadi, mere naam hi likh dO
ChalO hum maan lete hai ke sazaa ke mustahiq hain hum
Koii Enaam na likhO koi ilzaam hii likh dO
Tum apna naam na likho, gumnaam hi likh dO
Meri qismat mein gham-e-tanhayi hai lekin
Tamaam umar na likho magar ek shaam hi likh dO
Zuroori nahi ki mil jaaye sukoon har kisi kO
Sare-e-bazm na aao magar benaam hi likh do
Ye jaanta hoon ki umar bhar tanha mujhkO rehna hai
Magar pal dO pal, ghadi do ghadi, mere naam hi likh dO
ChalO hum maan lete hai ke sazaa ke mustahiq hain hum
Koii Enaam na likhO koi ilzaam hii likh dO
10/23/2009 8:31 AMmera rishta
Hai Mera Ye Rishta Tujhse Maine poochha jab us se,hai tera kya rishta mujhse...
wo bola kuchh yoon,hai mera ye rishta tujhse.......
sooraj ka jo kirano se...
neendon ka jo sapno se...
sur ka jo saazon se...
geeton ka jo alfazon se...
jheelon ka jo kanwal se...
sheron ka jo gazal se....
gul ka jo bulbul se....
dhadkan ka hai jo dil se......
Poochha jab apne dil se,dil ne kaha ye chupke se....
kaise kahoon mein ye us se,hai mera ye rishta tujh se..
baarish ka jo badal se...
nainon ka jo kajal se....
nadiyon ka jo paani se.....
raat ka jo raat ki raani se....
baagon ka jo bahaaron se....
chand ka jo sitaron se...
badlee ka jo saawan se...
sajnee ka jo saajan se....
Hai mera ye rishta tujhse ..!!!
wo bola kuchh yoon,hai mera ye rishta tujhse.......
sooraj ka jo kirano se...
neendon ka jo sapno se...
sur ka jo saazon se...
geeton ka jo alfazon se...
jheelon ka jo kanwal se...
sheron ka jo gazal se....
gul ka jo bulbul se....
dhadkan ka hai jo dil se......
Poochha jab apne dil se,dil ne kaha ye chupke se....
kaise kahoon mein ye us se,hai mera ye rishta tujh se..
baarish ka jo badal se...
nainon ka jo kajal se....
nadiyon ka jo paani se.....
raat ka jo raat ki raani se....
baagon ka jo bahaaron se....
chand ka jo sitaron se...
badlee ka jo saawan se...
sajnee ka jo saajan se....
Hai mera ye rishta tujhse ..!!!
10/27/2009 3:01 PMRe: Sun lo.........
Mr.Hussain
22, Peshawar, Pakistan
Nice poetry Dear,
i am gonna also participate...
Just wait...
i am gonna also participate...
Just wait...


















10/22/2009 7:52 AMRe: Sun lo.........