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10/21/2009 6:35 PM Sun lo......... (71 Comments)

rajaxpert

Sun lo.........

Pass aao,ik ilteja "sun lo",
pyaar hai tumse be-panah "sun lo",
Ek tumhi ko khuda se manga hai,
jab bhi maingi hy koi Dua "sun lo",
Ibteda ishq ki howi tum sa.....
tum ho chahat ki inteha "sun lo"
Bin tery jee nahi sakun ga mei..
lot aao,meri sada "sun lo".
Daikh lo zindagi adhuri hai...
Na rahoo aur ab juda "sun lo".
tum sirf tum ho zindagi meri'
sach hai sach hai bakhuda "sun lo"...
Raaz koi nahi mera apna...
tum raho gee mere sada "sun lo"


@..@me.tweety@..@

10/22/2009 7:52 AMRe: Sun lo.........

yezindagi
k!-!ņ!jA 30, Karachi, Pakistan
nice poetry :)

10/22/2009 9:53 AMRe: Re: Sun lo.........

rajaxpert
TweetyVerified Zorpian 21, Islamabad, Pakistan
thankx didi...........

10/22/2009 11:35 AMRe: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

yezindagi
k!-!ņ!jA 30, Karachi, Pakistan
my pleasure...brO

10/23/2009 11:07 AMRe: Re: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

Hthegreat
Hassan 22, Lahore, Pakistan
janta hoon zamana chahta hai mujhay
mein sab ko azeez hoon magar zaroorato ki tarah


welcome back on Zorpia

10/23/2009 3:21 PMRe: Re: Re: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

yezindagi
k!-!ņ!jA 30, Karachi, Pakistan
Thanks

10/23/2009 3:23 PMRe: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

rajaxpert
TweetyVerified Zorpian 21, Islamabad, Pakistan
its oki...........

10/23/2009 4:21 PMRe: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

Hthegreat
Hassan 22, Lahore, Pakistan
No Neeed to Say :)

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10/23/2009 4:23 PMRe: Sun lo.........

Hthegreat
Hassan 22, Lahore, Pakistan
Dil ko youn ati hai bichray howay ehbab ki yaad
jaisay ujray howay bagho pay nikhar ata hai

10/26/2009 2:55 PMRe: Sun lo.........

luvumyfriends
mariya 23, mirpur, Pakistan
nice sharing dear :)

10/26/2009 5:50 PMRe: Re: Sun lo.........

rajaxpert
TweetyVerified Zorpian 21, Islamabad, Pakistan
@Mariya
Thanks dear.i think u like poetry...

10/27/2009 11:05 AMRe: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

luvumyfriends
mariya 23, mirpur, Pakistan
always welcome tweety
yes i love poetry :)

10/27/2009 5:49 PMRe: Re: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

rajaxpert
TweetyVerified Zorpian 21, Islamabad, Pakistan
@Mariya
koi khaas wajah ???

10/28/2009 10:03 AMRe: Re: Re: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

luvumyfriends
mariya 23, mirpur, Pakistan
kyun k mein khud b poetry krti hun :)

10/28/2009 6:15 PMRe: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

rajaxpert
TweetyVerified Zorpian 21, Islamabad, Pakistan
@Mariya
acha tu kis type ki poetry krti ho????????

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10/31/2009 4:31 PMRe: Sun lo.........

Hthegreat
Hassan 22, Lahore, Pakistan
kitna mushkil hai mohabbat ki kahani likhna
pani say pani pay pani likhna

10/31/2009 8:16 PMRe: Re: Sun lo.........

rajaxpert
TweetyVerified Zorpian 21, Islamabad, Pakistan
woooo so nice can u send me this on my cell phone........??????????

11/3/2009 3:45 PMRe: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

Hthegreat
Hassan 22, Lahore, Pakistan
if u want then i will
this is my Number
0321-4304108 u can sms i will send it to u
take care have a gud day :)

11/3/2009 8:45 PMRe: Re: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

rajaxpert
TweetyVerified Zorpian 21, Islamabad, Pakistan
no gggggggggg

11/3/2009 2:49 AMRe: Sun lo.........

irfang
Irfanjee007 31, Karachi, Pakistan
Nice Poem Tweety Frutiy .....! :-P

Agar ham ko bhi kuch kehney ki ijazat ho to kahoon....


===== WAFA KEY PHOOL =====

Main peyaar,wafa or khaloos key phool,
Apney hathon sey chun chun kar bantteta rahaa,
Or mairey haath,
Khood gharzi or be vfayi key kanton sey,
Lahoolhaan ho gaye,
Aisey me dill ney kehaa,
Too keuon en khood gharz logon key liye,
Apney aap ko zakhmi karta hai,
Or main muskra diya keh main mayoos nahi,
Koi to hoga,
Jo apney hathon ko zakhmi kar key,
Mujhey bhi peyaar or wafa key phool bakhshey ga.

11/3/2009 8:43 PMRe: Re: Sun lo.........

rajaxpert
TweetyVerified Zorpian 21, Islamabad, Pakistan
really nice

11/4/2009 12:05 AMRe: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

irfang
Irfanjee007 31, Karachi, Pakistan
Thanks Fruity....! :-P
Aap ko pasand ayi mairey liye yehi bohot hai. :-)

10/21/2009 8:04 PMRe: Sun lo.........

sardarG
Shagi 23, Lahore, Pakistan
Dil udhaas hai bahut koi paigaam hii likh dO
Tum apna naam na likho, gumnaam hi likh dO

Meri qismat mein gham-e-tanhayi hai lekin
Tamaam umar na likho magar ek shaam hi likh dO

Zuroori nahi ki mil jaaye sukoon har kisi kO
Sare-e-bazm na aao magar benaam hi likh do

Ye jaanta hoon ki umar bhar tanha mujhkO rehna hai
Magar pal dO pal, ghadi do ghadi, mere naam hi likh dO

ChalO hum maan lete hai ke sazaa ke mustahiq hain hum
Koii Enaam na likhO koi ilzaam hii likh dO

10/22/2009 4:58 AMRe: Sun lo.........

waseem1999
muhammad 21, Lahore, Pakistan
nice dear

10/22/2009 9:55 AMRe: Re: Sun lo.........

rajaxpert
TweetyVerified Zorpian 21, Islamabad, Pakistan
tnanx dear

10/23/2009 8:31 AMmera rishta

waseem1999
muhammad 21, Lahore, Pakistan
Hai Mera Ye Rishta Tujhse Maine poochha jab us se,hai tera kya rishta mujhse...
wo bola kuchh yoon,hai mera ye rishta tujhse.......


sooraj ka jo kirano se...
neendon ka jo sapno se...
sur ka jo saazon se...
geeton ka jo alfazon se...
jheelon ka jo kanwal se...
sheron ka jo gazal se....
gul ka jo bulbul se....
dhadkan ka hai jo dil se......


Poochha jab apne dil se,dil ne kaha ye chupke se....
kaise kahoon mein ye us se,hai mera ye rishta tujh se..
baarish ka jo badal se...
nainon ka jo kajal se....
nadiyon ka jo paani se.....
raat ka jo raat ki raani se....
baagon ka jo bahaaron se....
chand ka jo sitaron se...
badlee ka jo saawan se...
sajnee ka jo saajan se....
Hai mera ye rishta tujhse ..!!!

11/4/2009 4:03 AMRe: mera rishta

rizwanaslam
Razi 25, Islamabad, Pakistan
very nice.....

11/4/2009 4:22 AMRe: Re: mera rishta

waseem1999
muhammad 21, Lahore, Pakistan
thanx g

10/23/2009 12:26 PMRe: Sun lo.........

Viseguy
Wiseguy 25, Karachi, Pakistan
Nice poetry dear :)

10/23/2009 3:07 PMRe: Re: Sun lo.........

rajaxpert
TweetyVerified Zorpian 21, Islamabad, Pakistan
thanks dear//////////

10/26/2009 8:54 AMRe: Sun lo.........

bullete
DON 21, Islamabad, Pakistan
nice ha :)

10/26/2009 9:36 AMRe: Re: Sun lo.........

rajaxpert
TweetyVerified Zorpian 21, Islamabad, Pakistan
thnaks

10/27/2009 3:01 PMRe: Sun lo.........

pureasian
Mr.Hussain 22, Peshawar, Pakistan
Nice poetry Dear,
i am gonna also participate...
Just wait...

10/27/2009 5:45 PMRe: Re: Sun lo.........

rajaxpert
TweetyVerified Zorpian 21, Islamabad, Pakistan
thanx bro,
i will w8..........

10/27/2009 4:19 PMRe: Sun lo.........

1lastchance
♥k.k♥ 18, Pakistan
SOO NYC OF U DEAR ,,,,,,BE BLESSED

10/27/2009 5:44 PMRe: Re: Sun lo.........

rajaxpert
TweetyVerified Zorpian 21, Islamabad, Pakistan
thanx dear........

10/27/2009 7:22 PMRe: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

1lastchance
♥k.k♥ 18, Pakistan
u r most welcome dear :)

10/28/2009 4:25 AMRe: Sun lo.........

twisty
Hõñêý Ð 81, Gujranwala, Pakistan
nice by allz:)
i will also post some bt some other tym as am so laaaaaaaaaaaaaaazy now:P

10/28/2009 6:22 PMRe: Re: Sun lo.........

rajaxpert
TweetyVerified Zorpian 21, Islamabad, Pakistan
@Honey
why are u so lazy???????

10/29/2009 1:57 PMRe: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

twisty
Hõñêý Ð 81, Gujranwala, Pakistan
Paaataaaaaaaaa nahi kyun:(

10/30/2009 7:47 AMRe: Re: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

rajaxpert
TweetyVerified Zorpian 21, Islamabad, Pakistan
@honey
kuin pata nahi g??????????

10/31/2009 4:56 AMRe: Re: Re: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

twisty
Hõñêý Ð 81, Gujranwala, Pakistan
araaaaaaaaaaaaaaay lazy jo hon:P

10/31/2009 8:34 AMRe: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

rajaxpert
TweetyVerified Zorpian 21, Islamabad, Pakistan
@honey
ary tu lazy kuin ho???????

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10/28/2009 4:48 AMRe: Sun lo.........

waseem1999
muhammad 21, Lahore, Pakistan
chalo kr dena

10/28/2009 6:17 PMRe: Re: Sun lo.........

rajaxpert
TweetyVerified Zorpian 21, Islamabad, Pakistan
oki g.........

11/4/2009 4:36 AMRe: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

waseem1999
muhammad 21, Lahore, Pakistan

11/4/2009 4:18 PMRe: Re: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

rajaxpert
TweetyVerified Zorpian 21, Islamabad, Pakistan
yh kia ?

11/4/2009 4:24 PMRe: Re: Re: Re: Re: Sun lo.........

waseem1999
muhammad 21, Lahore, Pakistan
kia kiya?
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